So I searched my old cow compositions from my 'longhorn' files, and

But with a fresh look at it, I thought it needed some work.

Some repositioning of the calves, and a bit of strategic cropping, and I liked it much better!


I decided at this point that the background was too dark, and contrasted too much with the line of white cow backs.

Now, I liked the dark grass at the top right, but felt it didn't have a reason, so I added a tree.

While working through the shadows on the white calves, I wanted to keep them from appearing too dark for reality, also my frame for this is a pale yellow-gold, so I've imagined this finished piece as being fairly high-key.

And decided to fatten the tree.

A close-up of the 'Leader.' Isn't he cute! (Looks like a troublemaker for sure!)


I thought I was done at this point, until I saw it on-screen... (amazing how photographing a work can help with critique!) The tree was too dark for the distance, and I didn't like the yellow grass to the side of the right calf's face.
...And here it is! "Leader of the Pack"!

(...OK, I thought I was done with this, until I saw it on-screen... lol!)
I might do away with the tree after all, and the yellow grass in the upper left... But it's too late tonight to deal with it. I'll leave it a few days and take another look.
Thanks for reading! Hope you enjoyed the process!
(Ignore the slight color changes between photos. Most were taken at various times of the day.)
Your work is so vibrant, Rita. I love the progression shots, I learned a lot by seeing your various steps. And I absolutely love the terra cotta base color, I will have to experiment with that one myself. Thanks for sharing your process, the finished calves look awesome!
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ReplyDeleteI am amazed with the pastel progress painting. Such a great painting.
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